Twilight Ladybug
Twilight Ladybug
Are there any grammatical errors?
My whole life I hated roller coasters and pretty much any ride with twists, turns, loops, and drops at high, fast speeds. I even hate the ladybug roller coaster in City Park. Having only been on it three times, it remains as the only roller coaster I have ever ridden, but over this past summer, my parents decided to take me, my little sister Brianne, and my cousin Michelle, who is my age, to Disney World for my graduation. On this trip, I decided to conquer a ride much scarier than a roller coaster: The Twilight Zone Tower of Terror in Disney’s MGM Studios.
Do I need a comma after life in the first sentence? Do I need to change the tenses of my verbs to past tense, such as in the second sentence the word 'hate' to 'hated.' Is the third sentence too confusing or should I split it into two sentences? Thanks!
I still hate roller coasters today.
You don't need a comma after life in the first sentence.
You should change the second instance of "hate" to "hated" so that the tenses are agreeable.
You should seperate the sentence into two sentences. I would suggest:
"Having only been on it three times, it remains as the only roller coaster I have ever ridden. However, over this past summer, my parents decided to take me, my little sister Brianne, and my cousin Michelle (who is my age), to Disney World for my graduation."
Frankly, I would remove the "who is my age" part, but I see that You Are trying to show that you were not the only one there your age, so I left it in the example above.
Any of these interesting tattoos? How would you incorporate them into a tattoo?
Alright, so Im surprising my Mom with a tattoo- for her- like showing how close we are... and how much we love spending time together, or something specifically just showing HER and how much she means to me.
Id been thinking of a small ladybug, because her mom used to call her ladybug, and it was just something that stuck.
Or I had been thinking getting something like a cool heart with "We love each other the same." written across it. It has meaning to us, just because we are all each other has.. so neither of us could love one more than the other...
Im also open to others ideas anyone has... just looking for some NEW ideas...
We love the beach, any movies, TWILIGHT, she loves reading, we love our doggies, flip flops, going out, traveling...
Thanks!!
Sure.
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